Re: работа над буклетом

Vadim,

 

Below are some small changes to the booklet that reflect feedback from FTI, MLS and BSF.

 

First page:

-          After “Dear colleagues”, we should use a colon “:” instead of an exclamation point “!”

-          Last sentence of first paragraph – change to:  “occupy an unprecedented place in discussions among global leaders”

 

Second page, last paragraph:

-          Add “The” at the beginning of paragraph

-          Change beginning of 2^nd sentence to read “The Association represents” instead of “We represent”

-          Change 3^rd sentence to: “Independent gas producers now contribute approximately 10% of all domestic gas extractions, a rate that has doubled over the last 5 years and we hope to continue in years to come”.

-          Next sentence, change to: “We are committed to ensuring a solid and sustainable future for domestic gas exploration and production and recognize energy security as an essential component of an independent Ukraine.”

 

Thanks – Ryan

 

Ryan F Toohey

+1.212.850.5678 T | +1.917.280.2198 M

ryan.toohey@fticonsulting.com

 

From: Vadim Pozharskyi [mailto:v.pozharskyi.ukraine@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, July 15, 2014 10:25 AM
To: Mason Archer Yost; Toohey, Ryan; Devon Archer; McInerney, Jamie; Pacheco, Lawrence; Hunter Biden
Subject: Fwd: работа над буклетом

 

Dear Ryan and all, 

Please, ignore the latest attachment concerning the booklet.  Here's the final revised version. Give me you feedback so that i can proceed with it by the end of the week. 

Best, 

Vadym 

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