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Neil,

I agree with your observations. I would like to wordsmith page 4 a bit but
am otherwise on the same page. Let's go with it unless others have
objections here.

Best,

John


John DeLoche
*Co-founder and Managing Director*
Rosemont Seneca Technology Partners
333 Bush Street, 21st Floor
San Francisco, CA 94104
office: 415 767 1288
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On Tue, Jul 29, 2014 at 11:50 AM, Neil Callahan <
ncallahan@rosemontseneca.com> wrote:

> My feedback on new slide deck / options:
>
>
>
> 1. I like page 4 as a replacement for what we have
>
> 2. I still like page 6 – cleaner look
>
> 3. Page 9 is fine as a replacement, sort of looks like a soccer
> ball, but okay.
>
> 4. I like page 11, maybe have the role of gov in the middle and then
> have the three areas spoke out top, bottom left, bottom right?
>
> 5. Page 14 is fine
>
> 6. I like page 21, but with our original photos for each vector
>
> 7. Page 12, 27, 29, 37 and 39 are a good replacements
>
> 8. I like our original case study format, I think we keep it as is,
> same for fund terms page.
>
>
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>
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>
>
> Neil Callahan
>
> Co-Founder & Managing Director
>
> Rosemont Seneca Technology Patners
>
> 152 West 57th Street, 47th Floor
>
> New York, New York 10019
>
> 917-945-9516
>
> www.rstp.com
>
>
>
> *From:* John DeLoche [mailto:jdeloche@rosemontseneca.com]
> *Sent:* Monday, July 28, 2014 12:36 PM
> *To:* Devon Archer; Neil Callahan; Hunter Biden; William Lee; Rob Walker;
> Eric Schwerin; Sebastian Momtazi
> *Subject:* 2 more topics for today's partner call
>
>
>
> 1. Any potential takers for the $8.4mm left in the Counsyl Series D?
>
>
>
> 2. See attached. We had a professional designer look at our deck. The
> attached has some alternatives for some of our slides. Let's discuss if we
> want to change any of them.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
>
>
> John
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
>
> Begin forwarded message:
>
> *From:* Guillermo Gonzalez <guillermo@presentationblueprint.com>
> *Date:* July 28, 2014 at 9:20:10 AM PDT
> *To:* John DeLoche <jdeloche@rosemontseneca.com>
> *Cc:* John DeLoche <john@rstp.com>, Neil Callahan <neil@rstp.com>
> *Subject:* *Re: RSTP slide deck*
>
> Revised PDF for your meeting this morning.
>
> In case you want to reach out to me, my mobile is 408 421-7100.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> -Guillermo
>
>
>
> On Mon, Jul 28, 2014 at 9:02 AM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> Here's the PDF
>
>
>
> On Mon, Jul 28, 2014 at 8:51 AM, John DeLoche <jdeloche@rosemontseneca.com>
> wrote:
>
> Guillermo, thanks can you please resend in PDF? I am looking at it on my
> iPhone and the ppt does not render correctly.
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
>
> On Jul 28, 2014, at 8:35 AM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> John, Neil,
>
>
>
> Attached is the deck to review this morning. Per your guidance, I went
> back to the original slide template and fonts. Here I'm providing various
> options to choose from for the slides you indicated to focus on. Hopefully
> this way it will be easier to decide what to keep/discard. The photos
> included are samples in lo-res format and once we decide on the final ones
> I'll purchase them and provide the hi-res version.
>
>
>
> Look forward to our discussion at 9am PT/Noon ET.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> -Guillermo
>
>
>
>
>
> On Fri, Jul 25, 2014 at 5:41 PM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks for that insight too. Makes a big difference. Great, will talk
> Monday.
>
>
>
> GG
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
>
> On Jul 25, 2014, at 5:05 PM, John DeLoche <jdeloche@rosemontseneca.com>
> wrote:
>
> Great. Let's use the same dial in:
>
>
>
> 202 446 0487, 333188#
>
>
>
> Also, we have never presented the deck on a screen. 99% of the time we
> will send folks a PDF or give them a printout so focusing on transitions is
> not a priority for us.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
>
>
> John
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
>
> On Jul 25, 2014, at 4:54 PM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks John, that's great guidance. I'll have another draft for our Monday
> call. I'll focus on the pages you highlighted and will provide you with
> options for each one. I'll keep your existing template and fonts.
>
>
>
> For Monday, should I use same conference number as last time or call you
> directly to your office or mobile?
>
> -Guillermo
>
>
> On Jul 25, 2014, at 4:44 PM, John DeLoche <john@rstp.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Guillermo,
>
>
>
> Let's shoot for 9am PT on Monday.
>
>
>
> Basically the presentation in its current format has been working well for
> us. We like the fonts and the overall format. Specifically, we like that it
> is clean and direct. We would like to enhance it to make it clean and
> perhaps a little more edgy. We are mostly Mac users and our sense of style
> is pretty minimalistic and clean.
>
>
>
> Our thinking is the best candidate pages for a format clean-up/enhancement
> would be slides 2 (to make it less of a "Wall of Words"), 5, 11 and 12.
>
>
>
> The pictures you added for investment themes (slide 5) are a move in the
> right direction, although the pictures themselves do not feel consistent
> with the themes and are rather pedestrian. We are trying to convey a sense
> of deep technology innovation on this slide and capture the essence of this
> special and exciting time in the evolution of technology. For example, it
> does not feel right to have a picture of folks holding papers for "The
> Quantification of Everything"--this theme describes the elimination of
> paper and creation of deep analytics around data.
>
>
>
> For "Software and Robotics disintermediating traditional business models,"
> think Uber and mobility as well as robots doing the jobs that humans have
> historically done. Electric cars are captured in this theme as well as they
> are essentially powered by software enhanced battery systems.
>
>
>
> Maybe we have the same text boxes but you can find better pics for the
> four themes or we go with another master picture to replace the "matrix" we
> currently have there.
>
>
>
> These four slides are pretty important but frankly are too boring in our
> presentation as it currently exists. If you can find a way to turbo-charge
> them that would be great. I would focus on those slides only at this point
> and sorry we were not more clear about what we like and don't like in the
> presentation.
>
>
>
> Thanks for your efforts here and I hope this provides some better
> directional guidance.
>
>
>
> Have a great weekend and let's speak at 9 on Monday.
>
>
>
> Best,
>
>
>
> John
>
>
> John DeLoche
>
> *Co-founder and Managing Director*
>
> Rosemont Seneca Technology Partners
>
> 333 Bush Street, 21st Floor
>
> San Francisco, CA 94104
>
> office: 415 767 1288
>
> mobile: 415 793 7070
>
>
>
> This email communication is privileged and confidential and is intended
> only for the individuals or entities named above. Any unauthorized
> dissemination of any of the contents of this email is strictly prohibited.
> If you are not the intended recipient, please do not read, copy, use or
> disclose to others the contents of this communication. Please notify the
> sender that you have received this e-mail in error and then delete the
> e-mail.
>
>
>
> On Fri, Jul 25, 2014 at 11:35 AM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> Hi John,
>
>
>
> Ok. I think yes, it would be helpful to have a quick call to clarify
> expectations. I'm available today after 2:30pm or Monday 9am or 4pm. Let me
> know if either of these work.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> -Guillermo
>
>
> On Jul 25, 2014, at 10:58 AM, John DeLoche <john@rstp.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Guillermo,
>
>
>
> Thanks for your emails and your work. I have been in back to back meetings
> hence the slow reply.
>
>
>
> In general, we like the look and feel of our existing presentation but are
> looking to upgrade it with images or formatting that might be more exciting
> than those we currently have (pages 5 and 11 for example). We are not
> looking for a wholesale restructuring of the presentation with new fonts,
> etc. Just an upgrade to what we have which we think is clean and simple.
>
>
>
> I hope this helps. Happy to have another call if we need to.
>
>
>
> Best,
>
>
>
> John
>
>
>
>
> John DeLoche
>
> *Co-founder and Managing Director*
>
> Rosemont Seneca Technology Partners
>
> 333 Bush Street, 21st Floor
>
> San Francisco, CA 94104
>
> office: 415 767 1288
>
> mobile: 415 793 7070
>
>
>
> This email communication is privileged and confidential and is intended
> only for the individuals or entities named above. Any unauthorized
> dissemination of any of the contents of this email is strictly prohibited.
> If you are not the intended recipient, please do not read, copy, use or
> disclose to others the contents of this communication. Please notify the
> sender that you have received this e-mail in error and then delete the
> e-mail.
>
>
>
> On Thu, Jul 24, 2014 at 10:41 PM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> Hello again,
>
>
>
> I was able to spend some more time on the deck today so here's an updated
> one (v3). This one does include slide transitions so it's better if you
> view it in slide show mode. Let me know your thoughts. Open to any changes
> you need.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> -Guillermo
>
>
>
>
>
> On Thu, Jul 24, 2014 at 1:37 PM, Guillermo Gonzalez <
> guillermo@presentationblueprint.com> wrote:
>
> John and Neil,
>
>
>
> Attached is a first draft of the new RSTP deck. A few comments:
>
>
>
> 1) I've worked on slides 1-13 so far which were the ones you indicated are
> typically covered in the meeting and I arranged them in the order you said
> are covered. I will work on the rest in the next couple days.
>
>
>
> 2) In slide 2, need you to tell me what other bullet points should go
> there.
>
>
>
> 3) Slide 10 has some draft stock images and therefore have a watermark. I
> will purchase these once I get your alignment that these look good.
>
>
>
> 4) Let me know your feedback on overall look and feel. I can also add some
> transitions (not too flashy of course as we want to keep this professional).
>
>
>
> Questions for you:
>
>
>
> - What's the difference between RSTP and RSTP II? Both are shown in the
> executive summary and wasn't sure if there was a distinction
>
>
>
> - Do you typically use PC or Mac? Not a big deal as all the fonts I'm
> using would work on both but just checking.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> -Guillermo
>
>
>
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> <Confidential RSTP Overview_New_v4.pptx>
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