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> From: Sebastian Momtazi <smomtazi@rosemontseneca.com>
> Date: March 9, 2014 at 12:20:48 PM EDT
> To: Lindsay Wright[琳熙] <LindsayWright@hk.jsfund.cn>
> Cc: 李新中 <xinzhong.li@bohaicapital.com>, Michael Frick <michael.frick@ample-harvest.com>, Jim Bulger <jbulger@thorntonai.com>, Devon Archer <darcher@rosemontseneca.com>, Michael Leonard <mleonard@thorntonai.com>
> Subject: Re: 答复: Bohai PPT
> Lindsay,
>
> Having gone through the version Mike sent round, attached please find my comments and changes in blue.
>
> Regards,
>
> Sebastian
>
>
>> On Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 2:52 PM, Michael Leonard <mleonard@thorntonai.com> wrote:
>> Lindsay,
>>
>> Jim and I have gone through this pitch and carefully and attached a new draft that incorporates Thornton's comments. We attempted to overlay our edits with Michael Frick's in the color Green. We had trouble using the "strike-through" feature so sometimes text is changed to green just to call attention to an area where we may have deleted something.
>>
>> As Michael Frick did we tried to improve the English and give it a more native speaker sound. We also tried to clarify some points as we interpreted them. Sebastian at Rosemont (who is copied on this email) is going to take a look at this draft as well and send around any additional comments if he has any.
>>
>> Please note, we did not only have edits but we had comments and questions about some content that we found unclear (usually denoted with a "[???]") specifically on page 13 and page 29. If these could also be addressed that would be appreciated.
>>
>> If you have any questions or need anymore assistance please let me know.
>>
>> Many thanks,
>> Mike
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>> On Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 6:03 AM, 李新中 <xinzhong.li@bohaicapital.com> wrote:
>>> Thanks Lindsay for your kind arrangements. The team will finalize the draft when receiving Michael’s comments.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> 发件人: Lindsay Wright[琳熙] [mailto:LindsayWright@hk.jsfund.cn]
>>> 发送时间: 2014年3月7日 18:02
>>> 收件人: xinzhong.li (xinzhong.li@bohaicapital.com); Leonard Mike (mleonard@thorntonai.com)
>>> 抄送: Michael Frick
>>> 主题: FW: Bohai PPT
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> All,
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Attached are marked up comments that Michael Frick has kindly done. Note we have attempted to reflect better English/clarification so do not take any offence…..however open to the fact that you may not want to accept all of these changes
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Given Michael Leonard is due to review this US time – Michael I suggest you edit over Michael Frocks comments so Bohai can have back consolidated comments. Plus this will be more efficient.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Michael Leonard please review and send back ahead of BJ opening Monday.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Thanks and have a good weekend.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Regards
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> From: Michael Frick [mailto:michael.frick@ample-harvest.com]
>>> Sent: Friday, March 07, 2014 5:45 PM
>>> To: Lindsay Wright[琳熙]
>>> Subject: Bohai PPT
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Lindsay – as attached.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Best
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Michael
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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