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Mate
This is very solid. Only two small alterations
Both in the first para
line 2 - substitute "Navy" for "Naval"
line 7 - I would delete the words "act of"

But that is it. Otherwise looks good. How is the security clearance
doc coming?
ADM Beck said he is standing by to chat if you need him.

Cheers GPK

On 11.06.2012 14:08, Hunter Biden wrote:
> G-
> Sorry to impose again but read below and give me your feedback. This
> is my "Motivation Statement" for standard application. I've made
> minor
> edits where needed- just want to make sure content makes sense. I've
> completed most forms- still working of SF 86-- everywhere I've been
> out of country in last 7 years is a long list.
>
> There are two reasons in particular that motivate me to join the
> United States Naval Reserves as a Public Affairs Officer. The first
> is
> my own brother\u2019s service in the Army National Guard and his
> deployment to Iraq in 2008-9. My pride in his service and the men and
> women that I became acquainted with due to his service motivated me
> to
> find my own path to serve within the U.S. Military. The second
> motivation is my belief that there is no greater act of contribution
> to the security our country than service in the military,
> particularly
> at a time of war.
>
> I believe that I have the ability to contribute as a Public Affairs
> Officer in The Navy Reserve due to my professional experience and my
> educational background. I have established a successful law practice
> and an investment advisory firm as well as having worked in
> communications for both the federal government and a large
> multinational bank. Furthermore, I currently serve on several boards
> that promote the interests of U.S. national security and serve as an
> adjunct professor at Georgetown University\u2019s School of Foreign
> Service in the International Security Department. I believe my career
> in the private sector has prepared me well for the demands of a
> Public
> Affairs Officer in the Navy.
>
> I also believe my educational background prepares me well for the
> duties and demands of a Navy Reserve Public Affairs Officer, as I
> understand them. I have employed the communication and writing
> skills
> that I developed as a student at Yale Law School, and as an
> undergraduate at Georgetown University in every aspect of my
> professional life for the past twenty years. From writing legal
> documents and developing communication strategies on behalf of
> clients, to conceiving and deploying large scale nationwide
> educational initiatives while working for Secretary William Daley at
> The U.S. Department of Commerce, my career has depended on my ability
> to communicate complex issues to a wide array of audiences.
>
> Finally, I believe that I can contribute and because of that I have
> a duty to do so. I believe I meet all the physical requirements
> expected of an Officer in the Navy Reserve and I hope that I could
> represent the Navy with the highest level of integrity and honor
> expected of an Officer in the Navy Reserves Program
>
> R. Hunter Biden
> Rosemont Seneca Partners
> Washington D.C.
> 202-333-1880 [1]
>
> RHB
> 202.333.1880
>
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