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great edits - incorporated most of them, though I left the section with our mission statement the same.
Look good to everyone?

Joshua Alcorn
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> On Apr 3, 2016, at 11:44 PM, hurricane5155 <hurricane5155@gmail.com> wrote:
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> edits - vbo - discard as you see fit
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>> On Apr 3, 2016, at 6:00 PM, Joshua Alcorn <josh@beaubidenfoundation.org <mailto:josh@beaubidenfoundation.org>> wrote:
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>> Any additional feedback? Per Hunter’s suggestion I changed one sentence:
>> "our entire family wanted to make sure his fight to protect children continued” rather than “his brother, sister and I"
>> Revised draft attached and updated in the google drive.
>> Valerie or Hallie, if you have any edits, please let me know tomorrow morning, as we’ll shoot this over to Jason Levine at the News Journal after lunch.
>> Thanks,
>> Josh
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>> Joshua Alcorn
>> 302/295.8340 (office)
>> 302/598.1885 (cell)
>> josh@beaubidenfoundation.org <mailto:josh@beaubidenfoundation.org>
>>> On Apr 1, 2016, at 2:14 PM, Ashley Biden <abiden@dcjustice.org <mailto:abiden@dcjustice.org>> wrote:
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>>> Tears and pride. I love it. Love you all.
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>>> From: Josh Alcorn [mailto:josh@beaubiden.com <mailto:josh@beaubiden.com>] On Behalf Of Joshua Alcorn
>>> Sent: Friday, April 01, 2016 1:28 PM
>>> To: Hallie; Hunter Biden; Ashley Biden; Valerie Biden Owens
>>> Cc: Patty Dailey Lewis
>>> Subject: Op-ed
>>>
>>> Hello,
>>> I’ve attached, and included in the google drive, the draft of the op-ed Patty and I will pitch to the News Journal for publication next week. Once we started drafting this document, we decided against including a survivor of abuse as a co-author. We can always come back to that idea in the future.
>>> Please take a look and let Patty and me know what you think. This is the first lengthy public statement Hallie has made about the Foundation, and so I want to make sure it’s perfect. For what it’s worth, I think it’s great, but want your feedback.
>>> If you can take a look today or over the weekend, that would be great. I’d like to pitch this to the opinion page editor on Monday.
>>> Thank you,
>>> Josh
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