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I agree with Mike S.

As some of the verbiage is repetitive, I would suggest something like this:


Join us as we kick off March Madness and raise funds for ZERO - The Project to End Prostrate Cancer

Place: Nationals Park
Date: Friday, March 16th
Time: 2:00 pm to 10:00 pm

This inaugural event will feature non-stop food, open bar and the 16 games played that day on multiple big screen TV's in the Diamond Club at Nationals Park. Between games take batting practice, tour the locker room, get a massage and/or cigar, and much more.

Space is limited so register today (below) or contact Haley Webb (haley@zerocancer.org or 202-303-3115).

Free parking in Lot C (corner of N and 1st, SE).

For more information visit: ________________ [link to page on Zero web site with ALL event details, including directions, pictures, updates, etc.]


CLICK HERE to purchase tickets


Mike


On Feb 3, 2012, at 3:56 PM, Ron Sallerson wrote:

> Gentlemen,
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> Here is the revised email invitation. I incorporated all of the suggestions we discussed on the call yesterday. I deleted some language and added some other language, so the net may be the same length as before.
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> Please let me know your comments. I would like to get this finalized on Monday, so we can distribute in our newsletter on Tuesday.
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> Have a nice weekend.
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> Ron
> Ron Sallerson
> ron@zerocancer.org
> Director of Development
> 202-303-3133 (main)
> 571-257-8559 (fax)
> 301-938-3632 (cell)
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> ZERO – The Project to End Prostate Cancer
> www.zerocancer.org
> Facebook: ZERO — The Project to End Prostate Cancer
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