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While I understand we need to convey the seriousness with which Beau takes his commitment to the people of Delaware, I think our posture should be one of excitement about the future possibilities.

Part of that, to me, is treating this like a conversation or letter to the people of Delaware. That's better accomplished by sending this out as an email from Beau to our list. We can include press, but just a press release seems too sterile to me. I also believe we should post the full letter to Facebook and our website, so anyone not on our list can read it for themselves.

Thanks,
Molly


Molly Magarik
302-377-2625 (m)


> On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:28 PM, hurricane5155 <hurricane5155@gmail.com> wrote:
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> definitely take out take care line for press release. vbo
>> On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:22 PM, Josh Alcorn <josh@beaubiden.com> wrote:
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>> I think there is plenty of good stuff here. The "four year commitment" section is gold.
>>
>> One of the things I liked in the last draft was the tight link between the thought of Gov in 2016 and the decision not to run now. I would suggest flipping that sixth graf (therefore, I am announcing...) with the seventh.
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>> With that change, the thought process you went through is explained before your decision is announced.
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>> One clarification: is this a press release or an email to supporters? If an email, the "take care" ending is good. But if it's a press release, I suggest cutting that.
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>> Curious to hear other thoughts.
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>> /ja
>> 302-598-1885 (cell)
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>> Sent from my iPhone, which is responsible for any typos.
>>
>>> On Apr 15, 2014, at 7:38 PM, "molly@beaubiden.com" <molly@beaubiden.com> wrote:
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>>> All--
>>>
>>> Please see attached for the draft statement that Beau and Valerie worked on this afternoon.
>>>
>>> Release is slated for Thursday, so please send any edits ASAP.
>>>
>>> Thank you,
>>> Molly
>>>
>>>
>>> <Beau announcement 4_15 .v.2doc.doc>
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