Re: Beau announcement 4:15 .doc?

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definitely take out take care line for press release. vbo
On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:22 PM, Josh Alcorn <josh@beaubiden.com> wrote:

> I think there is plenty of good stuff here. The "four year commitment" section is gold.
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> One of the things I liked in the last draft was the tight link between the thought of Gov in 2016 and the decision not to run now. I would suggest flipping that sixth graf (therefore, I am announcing...) with the seventh.
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> With that change, the thought process you went through is explained before your decision is announced.
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> One clarification: is this a press release or an email to supporters? If an email, the "take care" ending is good. But if it's a press release, I suggest cutting that.
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> Curious to hear other thoughts.
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> /ja
> 302-598-1885 (cell)
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> Sent from my iPhone, which is responsible for any typos.
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>> On Apr 15, 2014, at 7:38 PM, "molly@beaubiden.com" <molly@beaubiden.com> wrote:
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>> All--
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>> Please see attached for the draft statement that Beau and Valerie worked on this afternoon.
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>> Release is slated for Thursday, so please send any edits ASAP.
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>> Thank you,
>> Molly
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>> <Beau announcement 4_15 .v.2doc.doc>

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