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> From: Mark Zwonitzer <zwonmark@gmail.com>
> Subject: The full manuscript
> Date: August 17, 2017 at 6:27:00 PM EDT
> To: Peter Henderson <67stingray@gmx.com>, Valerie Owens <hurricane5155@gmail.com>, lakeprinterhp@hpeprint.com
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> Here is the full manuscript as it stands today.
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> There are about a half-dozen or so specific questions we did not fully resolve this weekend and I will send a separate note detailing those and flagging the pertinent pages tomorrow morning. I also want to continue to look for places to add more Hallie, and will try to have some suggestions about that by end of day Friday.
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> If there any major changes -- like many paragraphs of cuts or many paragraphs of additions -- we should try to get them in by August 23. Or soon thereafter.
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> There will be another full copyedited manuscript called First Pass Pages on August 31. We will have from August 31 until Sept 11 to make other changes.
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> So there is still a good window of time, but it becomes harder to make major additions and subtractions at the very end.
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> As far as method goes: I find it is best to read a full chapter at a time without a pen in hand to get the entire flow, and then go back for a second pass to mark it up.
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> Meantime, congratulations. It's a book!
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> Best,
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> Mark
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> PS-- Val -- I know Howard said he was setting aside time to read it this weekend.
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