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I think there is plenty of good stuff here. The "four year commitment" section is gold.

One of the things I liked in the last draft was the tight link between the thought of Gov in 2016 and the decision not to run now. I would suggest flipping that sixth graf (therefore, I am announcing...) with the seventh.

With that change, the thought process you went through is explained before your decision is announced.

One clarification: is this a press release or an email to supporters? If an email, the "take care" ending is good. But if it's a press release, I suggest cutting that.

Curious to hear other thoughts.

/ja
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> On Apr 15, 2014, at 7:38 PM, "molly@beaubiden.com" <molly@beaubiden.com> wrote:
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> All--
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> Please see attached for the draft statement that Beau and Valerie worked on this afternoon.
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> Release is slated for Thursday, so please send any edits ASAP.
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> Thank you,
> Molly
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> <Beau announcement 4_15 .v.2doc.doc>